oh they’re friends 3 responses to “Toris” Generic says: June 19, 2017 at 11:33 pm Well, this certainly has some startling implications. Especially when looking back to the page Remember from chapter 1. Does the Toris we know even exist at this point in time? ..All this makes me want to know more about how demons are created. Reply Peter says: June 19, 2017 at 11:56 pm The last scene in chapter two has some implications as well, is all I’m going to say. (Also thanks for your two comments — you’re picking up on the stuff I was hoping people would, which is great to hear. Lot of threads I’ve sent flying around that I need to start tying down in this chapter!) Reply Generic says: June 20, 2017 at 1:15 am That’s really good to hear. It’s ‘hidden’ lore(?) like this that makes stories immensely captivating. I really wish I knew how to plan stories like that. I’ve also noticed some things about Stonebreaker and the influence he has (both past and present) as well. You are really good with consistency and subtlety, by the way. From what Stone-B holds in his off-hand in the prologue splash to what he’s been doing in this chapter and in Anya’s “dream” sequence in chapter 2. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.